The same measurement every model on the Sound Human benchmark got. The counts a script can run, the four things only a reader can see, with your lines quoted back to you, and a grade against twenty-four published drafts from the biggest models alive. Back within 24 hours.
| Words | Mean | Stdev | >30w | ≤5w | Kill | Pivots | Tricolons | Announce | Shelf | Grade |
|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|
| 3,120 | 14.2 | 9.8 | 6 | 31 | 2 | 3 | 5 | 4 | 6 of 9 | 6.3 |
| Pivot, p.2: "It wasn't the cold that stopped her. It was the sound." Say the sound. · Shelf, p.4: "hands the color of driftwood." Rented. The third thought was the ledger ink on her thumb. · Announcement, p.6: the sentence after "She didn't answer" explains why she didn't answer. Cut it. | ||||||||||
The first five rows are founding rows. They cost less because, with your permission, they become the worked examples on this page, first name only.
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Word count, sentence rhythm drawn as a row, mean and standard deviation, sentences over thirty, sentences of five or fewer, kill-list hits, em dashes. The same script that measured every model, run on your pages.
Negative pivots, tricolons, announcements, and shelf metaphors. Every one quoted from your chapter with the page it's on, so you can see it, argue with it, or fix it in a minute.
Six dimensions on the benchmark rubric, 0 to 10, and where your chapter would sit on the board. Then the three lines that would move the score most, each with its rewrite.
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No. Lower detection is one of the receipts of better writing, and the row measures the writing. Rhythm, pivots, tricolons, rented metaphors, sentences that explain the sentence before them. The things a reader feels and a scanner guesses at.
The Sound Human desk, the same script and the same rubric that graded every model on the benchmark. Every row is done the way the twenty-four public rows were done, and you can hold it against them.
Send the first 3,000 words. A row on the opening is the row that matters most, and it tells you what the rest of the chapter is doing.
Whatever you want. Fix the three lines and ship. Order a second row on the revision to see the numbers move. Or learn the whole method, thirteen stages, free to start at skool.com/stopslop.